My term 2 writing sample
Hi my name is Isaiah I go to pt England school.My favoured sport is rugby and doge ball I am very creative and I am smart.when I grow up I want to be a artiest or an all black.at pt England we make videos about empathy and we look after each other thank you for reading my story the end.
Hi Isaiah! My name is Brooke and I go to the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama. I really enjoyed reading your blog post! Being an artist would be such a wonderful, fun job. I am currently in school to be a teacher. What is an all black? I've never heard of that profession, but I'd love to learn about it. Good luck in school!
ReplyDeleteA All Black is the name of New Zealand rugby team
DeleteHey Isaiah
ReplyDeleteI'm in Adelaide, South Australia. I found your blog as I was looking through your school's website. Those are great goals, and I like how you've set yourself a target of 5 posts. Can't wait to see your next one. Are you playing rugby for your school this year? They haven't really heard of rugby here - it's pretty much only Aussie Rules and soccer - and there is even less knowledge of league. People here a pretty friendly though, in case you ever think about coming here.
I'll look out for your next post - maybe about The Blues first win of the season?
Roelant Dewerse
Oops, I meant to write '...people here ARE pretty friendly...' Just shows how you've got to check your work before you publish it!
ReplyDelete